As a reader, here's what I know. This annoys me:
Johnny said, "Is everyone ok with that?"As a writer, I'm trying to find a way to write a scene like that without using the word "said" SO many times. Here's what I've come up with:
Lori said, "Sure."
"Alright," said Frank.
"Ok," said Billy.
Terry said, "No. Why do I always have to be the one doing all the work?"
Johnny leaned forward. "Is everyone ok with that?"
Lori nodded. "Sure."
"Alright," said Frank.
Billy shrugged. "Ok,"
Terry slammed her hands on the table. "No. Why do I always have to be the one doing all the work?" She shook out her hands.